Use of DEWs in Modern Military Conflict
Part 1:
Draft at least five more pages of your research paper and submit it for peer review this week.
Part 2:
Then, select two of your classmates' responses and review them (each in a 150-300 word threaded reply). Address the strengths and weaknesses of your classmates’ questions, and the types of sources your classmates have described.
Ensure that each student receives at least two responses (feedback) before submitting a third review for any single draft.
Response to F
I like how you've started with questions in the introduction. By beginning with the questions, one is easily hooked, and right away, the reader would want to know what would happen if DEWs were used in modern military conflict. Even the question in the body about DEWs and how they work is integral in pushing the reader to read on. I also think the images enrich your paper as they help the reader visualize how DEW is used.
One thing that would improve your paper is organization. After the heading “research question/hypothesis,” there are no other headings/subheadings to guide the reader through the paper. I recommend that you include headings and subheadings of the