Message, Business Logic, and Tone of a Memo
Please review the attached memo -- Identify areas of success and suggest areas that could be improved. What changes could be made to your peers’ messages to make the communications more effective based on your interpretation of the message? Remember to keep the tone of your comments positive and constructive. You are reviewing the communication, not the person. Consider the following questions in your response:
How effectively do you think this message is framed?
How effective is the business logic?
How effective is the tone?
Support your critique with appropriate resource citations.
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Response Post- Memo
The memo presents a clear and articulate message. The subject of the memo, ‘Internal Policy Update,’ is specific and clearly illustrates the agenda of the memo. The main point, which is to change the policy and increase workplace effectiveness across all departments, is well expressed in the first paragraph. Throughout the memo, a professional style has been main