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Assigned Readings:
Purnell, J. Q. (2015). Financial health is public health. In L. Choi, D. Erickson, K. Griffin, A. Levere, & E. Seidman (Eds.), What It’s Worth: Strengthening the Financial Futures of Families, Communities, and the Nation (pp. 163-171). Federal Reserve Bank of San Francisco. http://www(dot)strongfinancialfuture(dot)org/essays/financial-health-is-public-health/
Clay, R. A. (2001, October). Wealth secures health. Monitor on Psychology, 32(9), p. 78. http://www(dot)apa(dot)org/monitor/oct01/wealthhealth.aspx
Sapolsky, R.M. (2018). The health-wealth gap. Scientific American, 319(5), pp. 62-67. http://ezproxy(dot)umgc(dot)edu/login?url=https://search(dot)ebscohost(dot)com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=edb&AN=132271091&site=eds-live&scope=site
Peer Response
Respond to at least two of your classmates and discuss the effectiveness of her/his support. Here are a few things you might consider when writing your response:
Is the support relevant? Why or why not?
Are the facts verifiable? If so, how? If not, why not?
Are the opinions well-reasoned? If so, how? If not, why not?
What insight on facts and opinions have you gained from reading about your classmate's post?
What insight might you offer your classmate regarding using facts and opinions to support ideas?
please write in 2 paragraphs and number them i.e ( post 1..... post 2...) Thank you
Discussion Response
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Your support regarding wealth inequality as a contributor to health inequality is relevant. The post contains evidence from scientific papers such as Purnell (2015), highlighting how poverty contributes to poor health outcomes. The post uses verifiable evidence to show how stress caused by a lack of financial resources causes problems that influence the health of those affected. The facts can be verified by examining the highlighted article, which can also be verified by searching for the documents indicated as sources. In addition, the opinions in the post are well reasoned because they are explained using evidence from the literature as well as personal encounters. For instance, a key insight I gained from the post was the impact of high-calorie food that contains sugar on performance. It decreases overall performance, which is an undesirable outcome. An insight I would offer to improve the post's use of opinions and facts involves citations. In this regard, using a standard citation format can help to redu...
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