Peer Reviews Regarding Gmail, PomoDoneApp, and TikTok

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Outlines Peer Reviews Outline Title: Gmail Outline (Simplify User Interface and Increase Account Security) Introduction/BackgroundWhat is the thesis statement of the outline? Thesis statement is not clear although it has something to do with increasing security and making the user interface simple.Was the system properly identified and introduced? If it was not clearly explained to the intended audience, state suggest improvements. Although system is well identified, the author should have indicated what Gmail support team is required to do to increase security. Is there a clear and logical argument made for the system being proposed? - Was the premise/change clearly explained? The argument is not logical and the suggested change is not explained correctly.Does the outline include 3 major premises to support the position? If so, discuss their appropriateness given the premise/change. If not, suggest/comment on possible additional premises to support the position. The outline shows two major arguments to support thesis statement. The author should include the third premise and support his/her position well using facts from scholarly sources. For example, the author should explain how the offline version of Gmail would increase account security.Logic Do the premises flow logically? - Identify any absences or gaps in the logic. The premises do not flow logically. No connection between the main argument and support points.Identify Logos presented in the outline. - What benefits are identified? Do they go beyond profit and revenue? The arguments given are not logical. The benefits would be accrued if Gmail improves its user interface and account security, which goes beyond revenues and profits. Identify Ethos presented in the outline. What expertise is shown? How is the research used to the authors advantage? Do you find the author creditable? No ethos presented. The author’s expertise is not shown and the person appears not credible. The research used to the author’s advantage is on the user interface improvement and account security.Identify any Pathos presented in the outline Is it appropriately used? Is it necessary and benefiting the outline? Nothing that the author says triggers the audience emotions. Pathos is not used appropriately. If it was used well, it would have been beneficial for the outline.SourcesEach point is supported by at least two academic/peer reviewed research? Proper citations (format: footnotes, sources: actual source, not search engine results). For each source, the sections paraphrased or quoted are highlighted in the pdf. Each point is not supported by at least two peer-reviewed articles. The sources used are not well-formatted and in-text citations are missing. There are no PDFs of the sources and sections paraphrased are not highlighted.ConclusionAre there several supporting points that lead to the author's conclusion? There are no supporting points that show the author’s conclusion.Overall ImpressionDo you see any strong or obvious (to you) arguments for or against the author's point of view that are not in the outline? If so, state specifically. One of the arguments that the author would have included is for Gmail to include live chat to support as a way of helping new users or those experiencing problems. In what ways would you change the outline to enhance the persuasiveness? I would add a third main argument and ensure that every point is supported by evidence. I would include the in-text citations and reference all sources well.What changes can you suggest to the structure of the outline to make the arguments more effective? Would you add/remove any premises? The primary arguments should be bolded and should support the thesis statement for them to be more effective. I would add one premise.
 Outline Title: PomoDoneApp (Antony Lopez) Introduction/BackgroundWhat is the thesis statement of the outline? To implement a lockout mode on PomoDoneApp to allow users add installed applications to a block list to further increase productivity and decrease user stress.Was the system properly identified and introduced? If it was not clearly explained to the intended audience, state suggest improvements. The system is introduced and identified well.Is there a clear and logical argument made for the system being proposed? - Was the premise/change clearly explained? The primary argument is logical and the suggested change is explained clearly.Does the outline include 3 major premises to support the position? If so, discuss their appropriateness given the premise/change. If not, suggest/comment on possible additional premises to support the position. The outline lacks one premise. The author should add a premise that shows proper evidence of how reducing online distractions can increase productivity. Logic Do the premises flow logically? - Identify any absences or gaps in the logic. The premises flow logically. Identify Logos presented in the outline. - What benefits are identified? Do they go beyond profit and revenue? The first premise is logical. The benefit of reducing technological disruption by blocking some content is increasing productivity. For sure, it goes beyond revenues and profits.Identify Ethos presented in the outline. What expertise is shown? How is the research used to the authors advantage? Do you find the author creditable? Ethos is not presented in the outline. No expertise is shown and one does not know if authors of the studies used are credible. However, the research is used to authors advantage by reiterating points from original articles. Identify any Pathos presented in the outline Is it appropriately used? Is it necessary and benefiting the outline? Pathos is used appropriately in the second premise. In particular, it is beneficial to the outline since it depicts the relationship between stress and procrastination.SourcesEach point is supported by at least two academic/peer reviewed research? Proper citations (format: footnotes, sources: actual source, not search engine results). For each source, the sections paraphrased or quoted are highlighted in the pdf. Each point is supported by two scholarly articles. Sources are well-formatted and the footnote is provided. Besides, the sections quoted or paraphrased are highlighted in the original article. Good work.ConclusionAre there several supporting points that lead to the author's conclusion? Several supporting points are present that contribute to the author’s conclusion.Overall ImpressionDo you see any strong or obvious (to you) arguments for or against the author's point of view that are not in the outline? If so, state specifically. The author talks about proper time management in the thesis statement. As such, the individual should include a...