Evaluating Logical Arguments Discussion

Evaluating Logical Arguments Discussion
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Evaluating Logical Arguments Discussion
Proposal Title: Canvas ProposalCommentsFront Matter- Cover page appropriate (logo, author's name, proposal title)?The cover page is appropriate and has a logo, author's name, and proposal title.- Table of Contents included (Sections/Subsections & Page #s, Table of Figures)The table of content is included, and it has sections and subsections.- Abstract: Is the abstract ~150 words or less? As the reader, summarize the purpose of the document & the change that you obtained from the abstracts.The abstract has 84 words. The document's purpose and the change needed is for Canvas to implement the ability to view discussions as a continuous thread. Is the justification for the change appropriate? Specify your view on the change.The justification for the proposed change is appropriate. In my opinion, Canvas needs to change the way students see responses to a specific discussion.Introduction/Background- Is the system and the proposed changes clearly defined? Specify any improvements you would make.Yes. I like it the way it is.- Is the background focused on only giving the information necessary? Specify any additional aspects you think should be included or removed.The background is focused on giving the information necessary. Nothing should be included.Audience/ToneBased on your reading, what is the tone of the proposal? What changes do you recommend to ensure a professional tone written to the appropriate audience?The tone is formal and professional.Problem Statement and Proposed Changes- Is the problem with the current system clearly defined & justified? What improvements should be made?The problem is clearly defined, and I am convinced that Canvas needs to implement this change.- Are the proposed changes clearly defined and well-motivated by the problem statement? Specify improvements that can be made.The proposed change is defined clearly and well-motivated by the problem statement. However, the author should state how the change will increase users' productivity.- Do you believe it is plausible that the proposed changes could solve most, if not all, of the problem statement? i.e., was the problem statement concise and exact? Any suggestions?The problem statement is concise, and the proposed change addresses the issue entirely. - Is the market size for this system clearly outlined? Are statistics reported from credible market sources(Gartner, Forrester, IBIS World)?Market size is defined. Statistics given are credible, and they are from scholarly sources.- Images/Mock-Up of the proposed solution? Properly labeled & captioned?Figures and images used are labeled and captioned and contribute to the proposed solution.Benefits/Cost/Schedule/etc- Are the benefits both desirable and convincing to the audience of this proposal? For sure, the benefits of the proposed change are convincing and desirable.- Are the benefits of the proposed changes backed up by some amount of research, where necessary?The authors use appropriate studies to back up arguments.- Are the costs and schedule plausible, given the writer's background? (i.e., was any effort put into coming up with good figures?) Are there sufficient details specific to the project included in the schedule (i.e., not a copy/paste Agile or waterfall schedule)?The cost and schedule is plausible. Additionally, sufficient details are given to support the project.- Are the members of the team listed with qualifications? Does their professional background and skill level meet the scope of the technical work outlined in the schedule?Team members and their qualifications are listed. Their level of skill and professional background are outlined in the schedule perfectly.
Proposal Title: Yelp ProposalCommentsFront Matter- Cover page appropriate (logo, author's name, proposal title)?A good cover page with a logo, title, and author's names.- Table of Contents included (Sections/Subsections & Page #s, Table of Figures)Table of contents given with sections, subsections, page numbers, and a list of figures.- Abstract: Is the abstract ~150 words or less? As the reader, summarize the purpose of the document & the change that you obtained from the abstracts.Abstract has 146 words. The document's purpose and the proposed change is for Yelp to implement a neural network to provide each user with predictive restaurant suggestions. Is the justification for the change appropriate? Specify your view on the change.The justification given is appropriate. A neural network would certainly enhance Yelp's usefulness and practicality since users will get suggestions of the restaurants they need. Introduction/Background- Is the system and the proposed changes clearly defined? Specify any improvements you would make.The system and proposed changes are defined clearly. I have nothing to add.- Is the background focused on only giving the information necessary? Specify any additional aspects you think should be included or r...