Challenges of Women Trying to Integrate US

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The motive for the essay is to demonstrate the challenges that women undergo while trying to integrate into the U.S. Indeed, moving to the U.S. presents challenges to immigrants. They find themselves in a new environment with a different set of values, cultures, and practices. At the same time, people in the host country do not easily accept immigrants. Finding opportunities like employment is also problematic for immigrants. The host country denies most of the immigrants the opportunity to earn a living. While both immigrant men and women face challenges integrating into the U.S., women have more challenges. Hence, it critical to pay special attention to the issues that women go through when they come to the U.S. Consequently, the main idea entails showing why women find it more challenging to integrate into the U.S. The thesis statement is: Women immigrants face various challenges while integrating into the U.S.
The paper starts with an introduction paragraph. The introduction is meant to capture the attention of the reader. For a reader to gain interest in the paper, the introduction must be thought-provoking. This part also proceeds to give an overview of the paper. It serves as a summary of the things that will be discussed in the body paragraphs. As readers go through the introduction, they should get an idea about what the paper is all about. At the end of the introduction, there is the thesis statement. The thesis statement demonstrates my position about the issue I will discuss in the body paragraphs. This is critical since the readers need to know my position about the issue under examination. At the same time, the thesis statement will assist in determining how well the rest of the paragraphs support my position. After the introduction paragraph, the essay has body paragraphs. These paragraphs are meant to elaborate more on the thesis statements. Every paragraph begins with a topic sentence that gives the main idea of the paragraph. The rest of the sentences then support the main idea in the topic sentences. The process ends up with a conclusion paragraph. Here, the thesis statement is restated together with the sub-themes. No idea is included in the conclusion paragraph. Instead, I have written all the closing comments and indicated the implication of my argument. The thought of the essay at the introduction and the conclusion are related. The two complement each other to emphasize the main idea in the thesis statement.
An academic paper must be well-researched. Investigators must take time and examine what other authors have said concerning the topic. Indeed, most of the ideas used in any essay will be other peoples. In this paper, it was necessary to undertake comprehensive research to get a better perspective regarding the integration process of women in the U.S. The paper uses a minimum of 10 sources. The idea is to ensure that every paragraph has at least one source. Someone reading the paper will be able to identify ideas that have been derived from other sources. Overall, the use of sources is satisfactory and enables the paper to be detailed.
One of the biggest problems is getting credible sources for the paper. Indeed, various documents exist that discuss the issue of immigration in the U.S. and the integration of women in society. While having many sources is good, it can be sometimes confusing. However, synthesizing all the materials has assisted in identifying those that are the most suitable ones. Besides, the use of scholarly articles has made it easy to locate credible information. Another challenge is writing in a style that the reader can understand. While the content may be well written, the reader may not comprehend well because of the writing style employed. However, I have managed to overcome this problem by understanding the audience. Since I know the target audience for the essay, I have adjusted the style accordingly.
I would like readers to focus their attention on the writing style employed. It would be important to get their feedback on if the style is appropriate for the reader. The comments should indicate whether or not the level of language used is suitable for the reader. Hence, readers should examine the style and make comments that will be used to make adjustments accordingly.
While revising, the paper, I will focus majorly on making it more persuasive. I will be identifying ways of using the evidence available to enhance the main point. A persuasive essay is majorly a...