Response to India’s Sanitation Crisis

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Response to India’s Sanitation Crisis
The title of the draft could effectively fit my interest when it could have been specific. For instance, the title should have been “dealing with India’s sanitation crisis” or “Addressing India’s sanitation crisis.” My interest is because the draft talks about how Indians can ensure sanity at every point of their daily activities. The writer convinces me that there exists a sanitation crisis in India when he says that poor sanitation is one of the leading causes of preventable diseases in India. However, I am convinced that the problem is solvable when the writer says that ChildFund, the Toilet Board Coalition, and SHRI have successfully solved sanitation problems.
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