Self Evaluation. Essay 1 First and Second Draft. Literature & Language

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Self-Evaluation
Write the strengths and weaknesses of two essays, also write how the writing improved in the second draft and second essay.
Essay 1 First and Second Draft
The first essay first summarizes the story of Double Indemnity, focusing on a comparison of the movie and novel and introduces the characters of Walter and Phyllis. The first essay differentiates the film and novel, comparing details on the plot, the characterization of Walter and Phyllis’s as well as details omitted in the film. The essay also mentions details that are included in the film and capture the essence of the novel. Nonetheless, there are weaknesses as the essay did not elaborate the complex relationship between Phyllis and Walter as this would have provided more insights on the story and context. The title of the film and novel ought to be in italics, while the referencing ought to be in alphabetical order. In the second draft and essay, there is a point by point comparison of the differences ...