A Thousand Acres – Peer Response. Literature & Language Essay

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July 27, 2020
A Thousand Acres – Peer Response
I was able to read through your paper and I found that both your analysis and formatting are good. On the one hand, I liked with the essay was your proper use of MLA citation throughout the paper. The quotes were given their proper page numbers so that I can easily locate them whenever I want to read the part of the book. This made it easier to understand the things that were being asked. However, one suggestion for improvement that I would like to suggest is the use of indentation and the use of same color and formatting throughout the paper.
On the other hand, I agree with the overall analysis of the theme of the story. You were able to illustrate this as early as the introduction (your thesis statement) and thereafter provided evidential support in the body of the essay.
Specifically, I see that your analysis focuses on the importance of the mother in the development and upbringing of the child. Based from your discussion of the story of A Thousand Acres, it could be seen that the presence of the pa...