How religious beliefs benefit with the death of a baby

This is suppose to be an argument essay paper...300-400 words doubled space. The paper I wrote was more of a life experience, because I was not allowed to bond with my child. This was 37 years ago. I wrote more of how religious beliefs were important in coping with the death of the baby. Which was fine with the teacher..but I just did not write more to debate the title and conclusion was not as he wanted it. I did write "I" in the conclusion....but with each body....six to eight sentences for each paragraph....I did write the reference Cowchock, F. S., Lasker, J. N., Toedter, L. J., Skumanich, S. A., & Koenig, H. G. (2010). Religious beliefs affect grieving after pregnancy loss. Journal of Religion and Health, 49(4), 485-497. doi: 10.1007/s10943-009-9277-3 He stated I needed a url ater the doi...but that was the cite out of the school online library base. This is what I had written with the source...but he said I should not have but et al behind first author...My example... A recent systemic review of 32 studies evaluating the role of religious or spiritual beliefs in recovery from grief or bereavement noted that some positive effects of such benefits were found in most (94%) of the studies that have been done (Cowchock et al. 2010). My title was, How religious beliefs benefit with the death of a baby. I will have to redo part of mine but stick with the title.