How did Watson, in Hooked on Credit Cards

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In his work titled Hooked on credit cards, Matt Watson employs revision to ensure that his point of argument is taken in. The first concept of revision comes out when Watson says that registering for credit cards is the first step the college-attending students can take towards establishing a good financial base. According to Watson, this is majorly because of the fact that at that particular juncture of their lives, the students do not have a consistent source of income and due to that; they are unable to register for loans (Hacker, 2006). This concept is differently spelt out in the rough draft, where Watson says that the banks consider having a good credit history as a must have, before approving your loan.
The second concept of revision is illustrated when Watson talks about the mechanisms employed by the Credit firms in enticing the students to sign up for their credit card services (Hacker, 2006). An example is the trend of lowering the rates to as low as 12% only to increase them later to percentages as high as 18 or even by a greater margin. In his rough dr...