4-1 Small Group Discussion: Crafting Business Messages Discussion Topic

Business Message Draft
Name
Institution
Business Message Draft
Dear supplier,
Subject: Subject – Concern over the welfare of your employees
First and foremost, I would like to appreciate the good work you are doing in making timely and accurate delivery of materials to our company. It is an honor having you as our lead supplier and I hope you would continue to keep up the good work to maintain our contract.
Regretfully, it has come to my attention that after intense scrutiny by both concerned citizens and relevant authorities, your company has been convicted of operating in a manner that violates the rights of the employees. Use of child labor, unpaid compensable time, unpaid bonuses and commissions, low wages, just to mention but a few of the major revelations.
In this regard, th...