Critiques on and Rewriting Thesis Statements

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"In this essay, I will try to prove that drugs such as Prozac and Paxil are unnecessary and probably dangerous."
The thesis statement lacks a sense of certainty. It alleviates the seriousness attached to a researcher/writer devoted and pledges diligence in ensuring that the given statement is either verified or nullified. Moreover, the statement has examples, which should not be the case in developing a thesis statement.
"In his novel The Long Walk, it seems as if Stephen King is attempting to make a statement about the evils of laissez-faire capitalism, and in my opinion, the characters and setting reflected this well."
The statement is averagely good, considering that it has the two main clauses required in a thesis. The first part is the observation, and the second part is the provision of reason. However, the statement lacks a call to action due to the absence of a "so what clause."
"The Great Gatsby is inarguably the best-written novel of the last 100 years, leaving millions of readers with either a renewed or disenchanted ...