Organization has been Selected for Analysis: Apple Inc.

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Discussion 1-1:
The main organization that has been selected for this kind of analysis in the Apple Inc.
This organization is ranked as one of the most powerful companies in the world.
By description, Apple Inc. is one of the largest multinational organizations in the world and deals with the provision of technology products and Information Technology services.
The first class of products that is offered by Apple Inc. comes in the form of electronic devices and multimedia. Such products include personal computers, smartphones and other devices, which fall in this particular category.
The innovativeness of the organizations has led them into making several other discoveries such as the introduction of iPods, iPads and many other highly advance consumer electronics that are operational in the twentieth century.
The other class of products offered by the organization comes in the form of the software services and development.
The cost incurred by the organization and hence the cost of its products is dependent upon the policy that it has adopted in its operations.
Instead of relying on the production of cheap products using cheaper means of production, Apple Corporation has opted to use expensive materials and procedures to produce very high-quality products that can then be sold to the customers at high prices.
The implication of the above is the fact that the company believes in producing goods with the best quality such that the customers are held responsible for the funds related if they would wish to enjoy the high-quality products.
This tradition is opposed to the likes of Google Android and other organizations like Samsung, which believe in the need to vary the quality of their products with the aim of price variation to include even the customers with low income.
Sentence assessment
The coordinating conjunctions are highlighted in black and most include ‘and’ to link two or more phrases, words and clauses. In assessing these sentences one can see delink the subject and verb by identifying the coordinating conjunctions. The subordinate conjunctions are highlighted in red as they link the dependent clauses with the independent ones. The independent clauses are then highlighted by underlining these parts. The subordinate conjunctions are important to determine the dependent and the independent clauses as they link the two.
The main idea in the second paragraph is the cost implication of producing quality products, and there are similarities with the previous paragraph in terms of writing style. The conjunctions used in the sentences and phrases were also highlighted to facilitate sentence assessment. The right-branching sentences were common, with emphasis on the main subject, and this reduces ambiguity compared to left-branching sentences. This approach also highlights the subjects since the modifiers are easily identifiable. Effective writing requires that one pays more close attention to the sentence structure, since the wring style can rely heavily on left-branching, right branching or a combination of the two.
Original paragraph
The main organization, which has been selected for this kind of analysis, is Apple Inc. This organization is ranked as one of the most powerful companies in the world. By description, Apple Inc. is one of the largest multinational organizations in the world and deals with the provision of technology products and Information Technology services. The first class of products that is offered by Apple Inc. comes in the form of electronic devices and multimedia. Such products include personal computers, smart phones and other devices, which fall in this particular category. The innovativeness of the organizations has led them into making several other discoveries such as the introduction of iPods, iPads and many other highly advance consumer electronics that are operational in the twentieth century. The other class of products offered by the organization comes in the form of the software services and development.
The cost incurred by the organization and hence the cost of its products is dependent upon the policy that it has adopted in its operations. Instead of relying on the production of cheap products using cheaper means of production, Apple Corporation has opted to use expensive materials and procedures to produce very high-quality products that can then be sold to the customers at high prices. The implication of the above is the fact that the company believes in producing goods with the best quality such that the customers are held responsible for the funds related if they would wish to enjoy the high-quality products. This tradition is opposed to the likes of Google Android and other organizations like Samsung, which believe in the need to vary the quality of their products with the aim of price variation to include even the customers with low income.
Rewritten paragraphs
The selected organization for discussion is Apple, Inc, which is one of the most powerful companies in the world. Apple, Inc is a multinational company mainly proving technology products and Information Technology services. The first class of products offered is electronic devices and multimedia. The products are mainly personal computers, smartphones and other devices. Apple, Inc emphasizes innovativeness to remain competitive and has products such as the iPods, iPads and other highly innovative products. The other main class of products includes software services and development.
The organization has adopted policies that influence the costing approach, and Apple Inc uses high quality products for premium products rather than cheap production means for mass production. The means of production is a strategic choice since the customers also prefer high-quality premium products. This approach contrasts with that of competitors like Samsung and Goggle’s Android where there is variation of quality to serve different consumers who may be price sensitive.
Discussion 1-2
The document, ‘What is the Heart Surgery’ is a medical article that was authored by Donald Briker.
The article is classified as a medical article because of the fact that it is both a technical material and speaks about the ideas mostly witnessed in medicine.
The document is designed to have several impacts most of which are attached to medicine.
The first and the most important responsibility of the article is to be able to provide an overview of the concept of open heart surgery as used by the physicians and other experts involved in the field.
The above is evident when the author offers to provide an explanation and definition of the term and.
The definition is available both at the beginning and the end of the article when the author winds up his ideas.
The other role played by the article is the provision of insight into the steps followed when conducting the procedure involved.
The actual target is the public and their previous impression is considered to have been a literary interpretation of the term.
The author through the article is very emphatic and intends the readers to be able to employ the concepts in creating a clearer understanding of the concept while also trying to appreciate it.
The lack of proper understanding of the technicality of the text may prove to be a barrier to the understanding of the material while the fact that its availability requires a person to access the Internet may prove to provide difficulties in its accessibility.
The development of the material strictly requires those with adequate knowledge of medicine and as an editor, I would aim at reducing the terminologies used to a level that can be understandable to the common average readers.
Original paragraphs
The document, ‘What is the Heart Surgery’ is a medical article that was authored by Donald Briker. The article is classified as a medical article because of the fact that it is both a technical material and speaks about the ideas mostly witnessed in medicine. The document is designed to have several impacts most of which are attached to medicine. The first and the most important responsibility of the article is to be able to provide an overview of the concept of open hear surgery as used by the physicians and other experts involved in the field. The above is evident when the author offers to provide an explanation and definition of the term and. The definition is available both at the beginning and the end of the article when the author winds up his ideas. The other role played by the article is the provision of insight into the steps followed when conducting the procedure involved.
The actual target is the public and their previous impression is considered to have been a literary interpretation of the term. The author through the article is very emphatic and intends the readers to be able to employ the concepts in creating a clearer understanding of the concept while also trying to appreciate it. The lack of proper understanding of the technicality of the text may prove to be a barrier to the understanding of the material while the fact that its availability requires a person to access the Internet may prove to provide difficulties in its accessibility. The development of the material strictly requires th...